Refined Shot List

Shot 1: A still, side on long shot to the protagonist (Tom) as he walks down the street to college.

Shot 2: A still medium shot of Tom standing. He looks up to the sky and acknowledges the bad weather. He walks out of shot and the film's title fills the screen.

Shot 3: Tom enters a building through a pair of double doors and walks down a corridor in the school hallway, the camera pans up from his walking feet to his face, when his head is in shot his voiceover begins. As he walks he is shouldered by a passing student and drops his books.

Shot 4: Medium-Long shot of Tom looking down at his books on the floor, obviously annoyed. As he bends down to pick up his stuff the shot abruptly changes.

Shot 5: Medium shot of Tom picking up his books, his hands and legs are visible, the shot then pans up to show his face, as he is thinking a passer-by ruledy shoves his way past, emphasizing Tom's unimportance.

Shot 6: Tom stands up and continues walking along the corridor. This part is shot in Tom's POV. As he walks he see's a friend, as his friend gestures to him the clip stops to conform with the voiceover.

Shot 7: Close up shot of Tom's face, although the camera is on his face, he doesn't acknowledge it. As Tom walks he catches sight of a girl leaning on a wall in the corridor, as he looks the camera looks too, at the same pace as him, the girl gives Tom a disapproving look and as Tom quickly looks back. the camera does too.

Shot 8: Tom walks through a doorway then is hit by a projectile to provide irony for the "good day" line, Tom is slightly dazed by the projectile then looks at the camera. The screen then goes black to end opening sequence.

Refined Script

Shot 1: (Music)

Shot 2: (Music cont.)

Shot 3: (Music cont.)

Shot 4: "You see this guy? *shouldered by passing student, drops books* yeah, that's me."

Shot 5: *staring at books on the floor* "I'd like to think myself as a passive warrior, a bitch of the system. *sigh* How depressing."

Shot 6: *passing friend in corridor* "That's my friend ... He's one of the obliviously high-ego, naive types, in other words, an asshole. But I'm one of the few who he actually likes, the feeling's mutual."

Shot 7: "That's Sarah, she's the kind of the girl who... well, isn't really a people person lets just say. Definitely my type.

Shot 8: "despite everything, i have a feeling this is going to be a good day" *projectile hits him in the head*

End of opening sequence.

Voice Over

Shot 1: ah school, drag, such a drag. Frigging Biology first, what a crappy lesson. Forgot homework again, and oh look, an airplane, first one I've seen today. A cage hurtling through the air with everyone else's thoughts. Haha, Frakie Boyle makes me laugh. But no, Planes are pretty safe, like your more likely to die from like a meteor than a plane...Song stuck in my head, legend tune, but don't tell anyone "I will try......to fix you!"
Shot 2: "And Lights will gui-id you home...@ oh, wait stop! got to cross the road here. Thank you Lord, needed to think there. Left, Right, cross, ah bliss, This feels like a good day. Right, one more lol thought before class, I'm gunna need something funny to get me through this lesson, Jack Dee, lej, "Week by week, build up your collection of 17th century ships!" awesome stuff there Jack, I am loving the comedy.
Shot 3: First friggin corridor of school, ah man, quick hide, Mr. Duncan knows I still haven't done my English essay, get it done! It's boring, but you have to do it eventually. ok, hes gone, its ok, right on with the day.
Shot 4: ok, so what to do for the next ten minutes, could read, surf the net, Ah hey, its Terry!
Shot 5(aloud until stated)
Tom: oi, Terry
Terry: you alright Tom?
Tom: what's up man, what you been up to?
Terry: not much, weeing myself about my psychology test next, but apart from that normal...
Tom: you'll be fine, your the best in the class, You spent last night revising?
Terry: not enough, Gears of War was just more fun.
Tom: it is, but you'll never beat my record.
Terry: I know, it's just to hard, how did you do that man?
Tom: Boredom, I'm just that cool that I spend all Saturday night on my xbox.
Terry: alright, time to go take that test, see you in a little bit.
Tom:Good Luck
(not aloud): That kid has to study more, he, and to be fair myself as well are like, ruled or something by our video games.
Shot 6: What time is it, still not lesson time, ah what to do. ah, cool air, and the fountain, it is a nice one. crap, I need to pee now. Watched "The Producers" too many times...
shot 7: don't run, you'll look stupid, right quick pace though. Here we are. free urinal, nice, oh wait, no, someone else standing next to it, ah he's done. now on with the piss. That is a good piss, getting it out that is, not that I get a feeling of ectasy from peeing. Wash, dry, and out to Biology
Shot 8: "...and ignig-----------ht your bones, and I will try to..." ow!! what the fudge!?